The Best Essay Has Quality

I’ve never once written an essay about a footnote I read in another essay. Or at any rate, I do not remember doing so. But the fourth footnote of Paul Graham’s latest essay is worth the exercise:

Sometimes this process begins before you start writing. Sometimes you’ve already figured out the first few things you want to say. Schoolchildren are often taught they should decide everything they want to say, and write this down as an outline before they start writing the essay itself. Maybe that’s a good way to get them started — or not, I don’t know — but it’s antithetical to the spirit of essay writing. The more detailed your outline, the less your ideas can benefit from the sort of discovery that essays are for.

https://paulgraham.com/best.html

My dad taught me to write essays this way, back when I was in the third standard. I used to make an outline of what I was going to write about, and then I used to write out the essay. Eventually, I got into the habit of writing out the outline and then the essay during my examinations as well, and for many years, that is how I wrote.

But not a single blogpost here on EFE has been written in that fashion, and for the last decade or so – maybe more – I’ve given up on the habit of first creating an outline.

These days, I sit and I start writing. I have no idea where the essay is going to go, or if it is going to go anywhere at all. The act of writing raises questions, ideas and related concepts in my head, and the essay takes itself there.

I’m not claiming that this produces good essays. Maybe it does, maybe it doesn’t. What it does do, for me, is it helps me think through whatever it is that I am writing about.

And I wish this happened rather more frequently, but every now and then, it also helps me figure out what I want to write about next. That is, the act of writing doesn’t just help me answer questions that arise as I write, but when I’m on a roll, it helps me generate new ones as well.

Ad that is why that footnote resonated ever so much. Because I agree today with the point that Paul Graham is making in the fourth footnote of his essay: creating an outline is antithetical to the spirit of essay writing. Not knowing where you’re going, and figuring it out as you go along is a good way to write an essay. Or to live life, for that matter.

This reminds me, as do so many things, of Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance:

In my mind now is an image of a huge, long railroad train, one of those 120-boxcar jobs that cross the prairies all the time with lumber and vegetables going east and with automobiles and other manufactured goods going west. I want to call this railroad train “knowledge” and subdivide it into two parts: Classic Knowledge and Romantic Knowledge.


Romantic Quality, in terms of this analogy, isn’t any “part” of the train. It’s the leading edge of the engine, a two-dimensional surface of no real significance unless you understand that the train isn’t a static entity at all. A train really isn’t a train if it can’t go anywhere. In the process of examining the train and subdividing it into parts we’ve inadvertently stopped it, so that it really isn’t a train we are examining. That’s why we get stuck. The real train of knowledge isn’t a static entity that can be stopped and subdivided. It’s always going somewhere. On a track called Quality. And that engine and all those 120 boxcars are never going anywhere except where the track of Quality takes them; and romantic Quality, the leading edge of the engine, takes them along that track.

Pirsig, Robert M.. Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance: An Inquiry Into Values (p. 254). HarperCollins. Kindle Edition.


You shouldn’t write to show others what you know. You should write to learn what you know, to learn what connections can be made between what you know, and to understand what you don’t know.

But the bottomline is this: you should be writing.

Please, write!

What’s Your Fifth Postulate?

It had long been sought in vain, he said, to demonstrate the axiom known as Euclid’s fifth postulate and this search was the start of the crisis. Euclid’s postulate of parallels, which states that through a given point there’s not more than one parallel line to a given straight line, we usually learn in tenth-grade geometry. It is one of the basic building blocks out of which the entire mathematics of geometry is constructed.
All the other axioms seemed so obvious as to be unquestionable, but this one did not. Yet you couldn’t get rid of it without destroying huge portions of the mathematics, and no one seemed able to reduce it to anything more elementary. What vast effort had been wasted in that chimeric hope was truly unimaginable, Poincaré said.
Finally, in the first quarter of the nineteenth century, and almost at the same time, a Hungarian and a Russian—Bolyai and Lobachevski—established irrefutably that a proof of Euclid’s fifth postulate is impossible. They did this by reasoning that if there were any way to reduce Euclid’s postulate to other, surer axioms, another effect would also be noticeable: a reversal of Euclid’s postulate would create logical contradictions in the geometry. So they reversed Euclid’s postulate.
Lobachevski assumes at the start that through a given point can be drawn two parallels to a given straight. And he retains besides all Euclid’s other axioms. From these hypotheses he deduces a series of theorems among which it’s impossible to find any contradiction, and he constructs a geometry whose faultless logic is inferior in nothing to that of the Euclidian geometry.

Pirsig, Robert M.. Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance (pp. 234-235). HarperCollins. Kindle Edition.

Apologies for the long quote, but I remain fascinated by this excerpt. Must be more than twenty years ago that I first read it, but it still boggles my mind that we don’t teach students in school that the sum of all angles in a triangle can be equal to, less than or more than one hundred and eighty degrees.

Now, these alternate geometries aren’t “wrong”. They simply become possible once you get it into your head that Euclid’s fifth postulate need not be true. That “through a given point there’s not more than one parallel line to a given straight line” isn’t written in stone.

And once you imagine a world in which the fifth postulate doesn’t hold, you can build up a perfectly reasonable, entirely consistent, completely non-contradictory alternate geometry. A completely different geometry from the one that we did battle with in school, but an entirely valid one.

A different point of view, in other words, and a whole other reality that emerges once you broaden your mind enough to accept it.


As Mark Twain put it, ““It ain’t what you don’t know that gets you into trouble. It’s what you know for sure that just ain’t so.”

Euclid, you could argue, knew for sure that parallel lines don’t meet. And that got him into trouble, in the sense that he couldn’t then imagine the worlds that Bolyai and Reimann constructed.

Which brings me to my question of the day: What are your blind spots? Or put another way, which are your fifth postulates?

What do you know for sure that just ain’t so?

Are markets always and everywhere efficient?

Is your favorite political leader superman (or superwoman)?

Are governments necessarily better than markets?

Are your political opponents always wrong simply because they are your opponents?

I can go on and on, but the point is to ask yourself some hard, uncomfortable questions. What do you think you know for sure that just ain’t so? The more you choose to not ask yourself this question, the more you’re setting yourself up for trouble.

Here are some of mine:

  1. Second helpings are a good idea, third helpings are even better.
  2. Caste is a stupid concept
  3. The Pune Municipal Corporation will never build a footpath in my neighboorhood.
  4. All politicians (past, present and future) are driven by votes and the desire to acquire and retain power.

I have more, of course, this is a very incomplete list. I’m always willing to listen to arguments, and especially so when it comes to my axioms, but know that you will have to work extra hard to convince me about turning my back to any one of these. You probably won’t succeed, and this means that I, like Euclid, have trouble imagining a world in which my axioms might not hold.

And if I can’t imagine a world in which they don’t hold, I find it impossible to analyze it, empathize with it, or help better it.

Difficult as it may seem, all of us owe it to ourselves to imagine worlds different from the ones that we have constructed in our own heads. Learn to try and let go of your fifth postulates, and a good place to begin is by asking ourselves what these might be.

All the best!